bible study homework

As part of my bible Study homework, I was ask to write me testimony, this is the frist daft, can you read it, and tell what change I need to make,
Just Me Jim Winters Testimony
December 8, 2005

May I ask you to listen to Me, not With your Ears, but with your heart?

Do you remember the kid in your school, that all the others kids made fun of. That kids was kid, was me, if you know me, I know that I talk funny, Who I am I Just me Jim Winters, Without Christ in my life,
I was un love, without friends, My School mates call me Dumb, So I thought I was dumb, if no one love me, why should I love me?

That was before I became Christian, my heart was empty, I look at other people, the ones that was happy and they heart was full, was Christian, So I became an Christian, I now have Christ in my life.

Christ has fill my heart love, and at times He give me his Grace and His forgiveness. That way I turn to Christ.


Christ came into my life, as an Friend, It took long time, to think of
Christ as friend, He listen to me with his heart, he support me without judging me, just as my friend do.

As an Christian, my heart is fill with His love, I have people who love and care about me, I know that GOD has plan for me, My pray will be answer in GOD times and not my.

Matthew 25:35-36
35For I was hungry and you gave me something to eat, I was thirsty and you gave me something to drink, I was a stranger and you invited me in, 36I needed clothes and you clothed me, I was sick and you looked after me, I was in prison and you came to visit me.'

1 Corinthians 7:8:
8Now to the unmarried and the widows I say: It is good for them to stay unmarried, as I am.

Yes, I was hungry and Single, today God and my friends feel me, not will food, but with love And Support . Yes I am still Single, but Today I have Christ in my life. My heart is full. but I am no longer just me Jim W.
Thanks for listen with your heart.